Hi Cypress, Your story sounds scary, yet interesting. Could you share your story on your blog with me and others to read? Remember to look at the layout of your post. ~Mrs Davan~
Hello Cypress! I like how you added a WALT and explained what the story was about. Maybe before publishing your post maybe you can reread it and make sure it makes sense. Your story reminds me of one of my own. Would you consider sharing your story because it sounds very interesting. Kelsey
who were the 2 kids that runs from the demon
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ReplyDeleteHi Cypress, Your story sounds scary, yet interesting. Could you share your story on your blog with me and others to read? Remember to look at the layout of your post. ~Mrs Davan~
ReplyDeleteHello Cypress! I like how you added a WALT and explained what the story was about. Maybe before publishing your post maybe you can reread it and make sure it makes sense. Your story reminds me of one of my own. Would you consider sharing your story because it sounds very interesting. Kelsey
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